I saw a kid standing in the dark of night
He may be at the age of 4 or 5
He was at the court yard holding
A big bowl, filled with water
And he stated to laugh and laugh
B cuz he saw the full moon reflects in that bowl
He thought, he got that moon in his hand
And he was happy, very happy, as ever seen.
( it was my dream to draw a picture about this subject in my child hood days, and told a poet from south Africa to draw this picture.)
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andrew149 Southbourne, nr.Bournemouth, Dorset, England UK(sabeel is the pen name of nazar malolmuku)
ReplyDelete18 hours ago
sometimes we are all children in our innocence and even if it is an illusion, if it makes one happy for a while, then it can be pure golden indeed. it would be a cruel man that told the child that his happiness was worthless. thankyou poet sabeel.....andrew.
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
ReplyDelete11 hours ago (sabeel is the pen name of nazar malolmuku-published in connecting singles.com)
"it was my dream to draw a picture about this subject in my child hood days.now i am not an artist to draw a picture.
some times GYPSY HEART can do this ..."
oh dear artist and poet sabeel-got tears in my eyes when i read your poem...behind the innocent child with the moon in the bowl...a deep and a pure heart within.Our wishes and our dreams becomes our dharma...always have a happy heart-your daily job and your dreams will be mutually aligned.Thank you dear artist and poet sabeel and keep on sharing your poems and always remember poetry sets us free...
HotrodLarrys Gower, Missouri USA
ReplyDelete10 hours ago (SABEEL is the pen name of nazar malolmuku)
wonderful words Sabeel, and that moon in the bowl is like finding Love on CS.... it can bee there if we can Get it, and Gypsy heart Nice words from you as well and andrew, al Have a Great Day, and stay tuned to the Heart.... Hoping to find more time to write myself, just a Rookie, But Has the Heart!
trurorob Alicante, Valenciana Spain
ReplyDelete9 hours ago
The innocence of childhood Sabeel why can we not carry this through to adulthood very nice
Rob
(commented on connecting singles.com )
HELLO...I AM POSTING HERE A POEM FROM connectingsingles.com posted by a poet, who wrote this poem about me and my poem.
ReplyDeleteFor Sabeel:painted friends filled with dreams
Author: gypsyheart
Little boy of four or five
with your happy face....
and a bowl with the
reflection of the moon
i cant paint your picture..
Sabeel already did it on paper
...instead
i can paint you a picture...
on canvas or paper
of a mosaic of friends
with the wisdom of sonofadam & spiritwalker
in Renaissance Gold...
With the gentle softness of quietstorm
In Rose...
With shhores enchanted spirit
In Violet...
With poetengineers kindness
In Naples Yellow...
With Andrew’s humour
In Bright Red...
and bentlee’s integrity
In Cremnitz White...
With trurorob’s funny riddle
In Carmine...
With yurima’s compassion
In Naples Yellow...
With walkerman’s Grace
In Copper...
With HotrodLarrys true heart
In Yellow Ochre...
with stareintospace’s bass clarinetist
in Emerald...
with amahlala’s magical bubbles
in Cobalt Blue...
with pre_c48’s footprints
in Ultramarine...
with amanda09’s brilliance in so. so! so?
in Pewter...
with nashnode’s Violin Play
in soft Charcoal Grey...
with Iiris’s believe and beauty
in Magenta...
with stressfree’s Sail Today
in Turquoise Light...
with boyshchrm6’s mended heart
in Terre Verte...
with anuna’s sweetness
in Lemon...
with passionatepoet’s Nuptial Blessing
In Indigo...
With moonlove’s wish
in Bronze...
so... you can remember all
the friends
you made
in the poet’s corner....
and to remind you
to follow that star...
and keep on
dreaming...
~ ~ ~ ~ ~
Posted: Fri Sep 4, 2009 4:48 PM
About this poem:
Written for sabeel's poem "dreaming of what we never get"...a painted one by request.
Sorry if i left a poet's name out....i need a lot of paper and patience for that.To all the unmentioned poets...love your poems too.Keep on writing...
gypsyheart Umtentweni, Durban South Africa
ReplyDelete40 minutes ago
All you poet friends and to remind you to follow that star sabeel.Please keep on writing...
sonofadam Swindon, Wiltshire, England UK
ReplyDeleteFri Sep 4, 2009 3:06 AM
My Dear Sabeel-You are such an honest and thoughtful man and I am so proud of your sincere comments, but I'm afraid you misunderstood what I meant, I did not say I would stop writing, only that I would stop posting my poetry on this site:-)
Now I will delay that decision for maybe another six poems, we shall see-thank you again-take care-Ken-sonofadam:-