she wants my profile
just to calculate my value of mind ,
which reveals love and honest.
nothing to hide and nothing to add later.
she is online and waiting for it.
i failed to fill the coloumns.
but , i tried to write something
and filled blanks with words like these;
everything is in my mind, it can show all.
i wish to open it, to get love and care from you.
but it coverd with trust and belief.
so i couldnt breake my beliefs and trust..
sometimes we never think twice..!
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Njord Melbourne, Victoria Australia
ReplyDeleteSat Jul 18, 2009 3:11 PM
I'm with you sabeel. Most of the chicks on here are full of sh!t.
They say they want a good person, but all they want is someone who looks like a male model, with a massive bank balance. Believe me, they're the ones that will end up alone, For Eternity. Good luck to you.
courage Morgantown, West Virginia USA
ReplyDeleteSun Jul 19, 2009 10:10 PM
I understand what you are saying. I don't feel it has anything to do with money or you picking up chicks, for I know that is not who you are as a person. You care for all. I feel it is about you're honesty and how you alway seem to care for others. I feel you are just saying how others should also care, be honest and trust. You speak only from the heart and of peace. This poem is well done, my friend. It is true that we can not judge a person by their profile. They say here in America you cannot judge a book by it's cover. Same goes for anyones profile.
If someone is truely interested, cares and wants to know the real you, they won't need alot of words on a profile. They can read your poems and see you are a good soul and friend to all! God Bless You! Peace!
Njord Melbourne, Victoria Australia
ReplyDeleteMon Jul 20, 2009 5:46 PM
Hey sabeel,
courage is a good writer but she's no prophet. When you write a poem venting about what some women are like, if you ask me, the last thing you want to hear is a woman you have no chance with,telling you that you're feelings are what's most important. You know you're more than a profile, hence the quality poem... when you want to write about how shallow some people can be, don't let someone tell you that "you're on the right track by expressing yourself" . You're four steps ahead, Some women think you have to write like a butterfly in order to express yourself, write from the hip if you have to, if the right girl understands you then all the better. Keep writing! and be yourself, not "that" extension of what the right girl might want to hear.
Althea7 Strathmore, Alberta Canada
ReplyDeleteFri Aug 7, 2009 7:09 AM
I like it.