It is not a big deal to start, anything
Even if we are not aware about its result
It may be the first reason to ruin our life
We will recognize that
we never wants to continue, after it started
And we cannot stop it,
at the right time
bcaz it is not easy to stop as it, we started...
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shhores HYDERABAD India
ReplyDeleteThu Jul 30, 2009 11:12 AM
very insightful of you..you are so right.
junebear barrie, Ontario Canada
ReplyDeleteWed Aug 5, 2009 5:43 AM
your poem says it all
when someone start something they see it through or end it before it's to late.
poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
ReplyDeleteThu Aug 6, 2009 1:21 AM
every time u have sweet wards to share with us , thanks really for all ur shares
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ReplyDeleteFri Aug 7, 2009 12:59 AM
Would it not be a little better to put a bit of rhyme into it or use words as metaphors or symbolism for what you are trying to say. It's just that it sounds a little too much like your writing sentences. The idea is basically good but it lacks the imagination to convey it in an artfull way. Art is about saying or painting something in a different way then would ordinarily be conveyed or seen. I don't mean to hurt your feelings but feel people are been to nice here and are not been constructive in their comments. People who want to be poets will not master their art unless there is constructive dialogue.