The distance between you and me is very deep
Because, we are strangers now
If we like to stand near and to be dear
We have to reduce our distance between us
So we need to talk more and write more
Until we can understand each other as well
Some times we will connect easily
But it may not be a long one
If we fail to feel good each other...
And my question is how long the distance you
Wish to keep between us?
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Althea7 Strathmore, Alberta Canada
ReplyDeleteSun Aug 9, 2009 2:48 AM
Keep up the good work
shhores HYDERABAD India
ReplyDeleteSun Aug 9, 2009 7:19 AM
this is down to earth practicality in a poem!!
very good...
poetengineer riyadh Saudi Arabia
ReplyDeleteMon Aug 10, 2009 5:19 AM
very meaningful words as always sabeel , thanks for share
sweetesttee lawrenceville, New Jersey USA
ReplyDeleteMon Aug 10, 2009 6:48 AM
Very beautifully stated sometimes people can be as close to each other as pages in a book physically and yet emotionally vast distances away because of lack of communication I like this one.
nice also feel good
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